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Tuesday, 15 December 2020

The Fishy False Teeth

Kia ora my name is Jessie. I go to Glen innes school. I am happy that I am posting something today. Happy Holidays and most of all happy summer learning journey to you all. Have a wonderful day.

8 comments:

  1. Hi Jessie,

    I am Sakshi and am a year 8 student in Panmure Bridge School. I really liked reading your blog post today! I liked how you have filled the template in detail as it helps the reader to understand the topic. I have also completed this task and I really enjoyed completing it with my friends.

    I also find this activity a litlle tricky as the video didn't have any dialogues and we had to match it with the article. When I completed this story I really liked the role of the taxi driver as he added a twist in the story making it more hilarious! Who is your favourite character and why?

    Keep up the outstanding work!
    -Sakshi

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    1. Kia Ora Sakshi
      Thank you for commenting I appreciate it. Thanks for reading what I wrote in the fishy false teeth squares. My favourite person probably was Janet because she makes people laugh and she says funny things. Happy Holiday. Have a nice day bye

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  2. Hey Jessie.
    I am ANgel and I go to the same school as you.
    I really enjoyed reading your fishy false teeth.
    You have outstanding work Jessie - Lee
    I am so happy about my summer learning journey.
    How long did it take for you to solve this?
    Anyways keep up the enthusiasm work!

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    1. Hey Angel thanks for commenting on my other blog to anyways
      thank you for reading my blog post. This probably took 5mins.
      Bye. Happy Holidays

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  3. Kia Ora Jessie,

    My name is Shannon and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.

    I really like your blog post. I think you really focused on the text and have accurately explained to your readers who the characters are, what they did, and where they ended up. Ka pai!

    Isn’t it a funny story! It would be crazy finding teeth in a fish. What else might you find at the bottom of the ocean?

    Have you done the filling in of the comic bit? If so, you should attach it to your post for your readers to see!

    Great job and keep up the fantastic work.

    Ka kite anō,
    Shannon (SLJ)

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    1. Kia Ora Shannon
      How are you. My names Jessie.
      Thank you for commenting on my fishy false teeth I appreciate that. I finished the comic too. Happy Holidays. Have a nice day

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    2. Hi Jessie,

      I just saw your comic! Ka pai on a fantastic job! I really like how you've so accurately matched the character's facial expressions to the captions and how you ended the comic. I think it's perfect and very funny!

      If you could write a comic on absolutely anything in the world, what would you write it about?

      Happy blogging,
      Shannon (SLJ)

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    3. Kia Ora Shannon from the SLJ Team
      Thank you for letting me join the SLJ group.
      I really appreciate it. Thank you for reading my comic. I made it funny so that it could make people that aren't having a good day turn their upside down smile into a nice smile.
      Merry mutunga o te Kirihimete

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